Thursday, September 30, 2010
Thursday, September 30, 2010
Following this, the students then answered the questions provided and as indicated in the instructions. If you were not here, both the poem and the questions are in your portfolio.
Wednesday, September 29, 2010
Wednesday, September 29, 2010
Tuesday, September 28, 2010
Tuesday, September 28, 2010
I provided you with a concise handout of expectations (starts with “1. Look at the title of this poem…") to explain exactly what is expected in a poetry analysis.
I then handed out the poem “Early Shift” by Peter Towers
You were to analyze it as indicated in the handout you have received today. If you were not here, the handout and the poem are in your portfolio.
Monday, September 27, 2010
Monday, September 27, 2010
Thursday, September 23, 2010
Thursday, September 23, 2010
· I then handed out the list of terms and concepts you will need to understand by the end of this unit entitled “Introduction to Poetry”
· I then handed out the booklet entitled “The Least You Should Know About Poetry” to help you locate and define the terms and concepts
· You were to put all of these on cue cards for study purposes (as indicated on the concepts/terms sheet).
Make sure you pick up more cue cards for this class as 100 is proving not to be enough (try for 100 per unit, though there will be less as we go).
Wednesday, September 22, 2010
Wednesday, September 22, 2010
You also had to examine your returned essay, note the comments, and find areas you believe you will/can improve.
I also handed out a copy of your progress to this point.
Tuesday, September 21, 2010
Tuesday, September 21, 2010
Tomorrow, we will start the poetry unit.
Monday, September 20, 2010
Monday, September 20, 2010
Thursday, September 16, 2010
Friday, September 17, 2010
* "The Crystal Stars have just Begun to Shine (page 60)"
* "War (page 70)"
* "Penny in the Dust (handout)"
* "Jezebel Jessie (handout)"
Thursday, September 16, 2010
A reminder: your in-class essay is on Monday and your in class multiple choice exam is on Tuesday.
Wednesday, September 15, 2010
Wednesday, September 15, 2010
Tuesday, September 14, 2010
Tuesday, September 14, 2010
Monday, September 13, 2010
Monday, September 13, 2010
I then handed out a sheet on how to write a critical/analytical essay. From this, the students wrote a character sketch using points 3, 4, and 5. If you were not here, this, and the comma exercise and rules, are in your portfolio.
Friday, September 10, 2010
Friday, September 10, 2010
I then did some mini lessons on the following common mistakes I am seeing in students' writing:
* using "could have" and "would have" instead of "could of" and "would of".
* using "until" instead of "till".
* not starting answers with the word "yes" when they are to be answered fully.
* using "because" instead of "cause".
We then worked more in-depth on the struggles students are having with "there", "their", and "they're". I handed out an explanation of how to use these properly as well as questions that were due today. If you were not here, look up the rules for these on the Internet and then do the questions that follow:
INSTRUCTIONS: Examine each of the following sentences. If they are correctly using “there”, “their”, or they are, write correct in the space provided. If they are not used correctly, rewrite the sentence correctly. Make sure that you spell all the words correctly as I will dock you marks if you don’t. Also, make sure you put capitals at the beginning of the sentences and periods at the end.
1. There hanging from a pole.
2. They look sad because they don’t want to be there.
3. One can see from the photograph that there looking at something.
4. No one makes there kids do something they don’t want to.
5. The kids are only doing this because their parents put them there.
6. This is probably a normal part of there lifestyle.
7. How is what their doing going to affect them in later life?
8. They should be hanging out with they’re friends.
9. Children need their time to play.
10. Governments need to tone down what they are doing as there children need to have lives.
11. I think it is wrong for China to bring such young children into a stressful environment like this because their just kids.
Thursday, September 9, 2010
Thursday, September 9, 2010
Wednesday, September 8, 2010
Wednesday, September 8, 2010
Author’s often reveal the personalities of characters through description, direct speech and actions.
Find at least two of each of these in the story for two different characters (so, four in each category):
Use a chart to keep track of your findings:
These are all due by the start of class tomorrow.
Tuesday, September 7, 2010
Monday, September 7, 2010
We then discussed the short story "The Crystal Stars Have Just Begun to Shine", by Martha Brooks. We defined what is meant by themes and Symbols (if you were not here, you must look them up and define them), and then I handed out questions. I have pasted them in here. These are due for tomorrow.
“The Crystal Stars Have Just Begun to Shine” (p. 60)
1. What is the problem Martha brooks introduces at the beginning of the story? What conflict does it produce? How are the problem and conflict resolved?
2. What do you think the title of this short story refers to? Why do you think Brooks chose this title?
3. What do you think will happen between Elliot and Rita after the story’s ending?
4. Which of the characters could you identify with? Explain your reasons using details to support this position.
5. Do you think the story offers a realistic portrayal of family life in Canadian society? Explain your reasons using details to support this position.
6. What do you think is the theme of this story? The theme of a story is what the main character, or the reader, discovers about life or people by the end of the story.
Friday, September 3, 2010
Friday, September 3, 2010
For this weekend, read the short story, "The Crystal Stars Have Just Begun to Shine", which starts on page 60 of your Crossroads text.
Thursday, September 2, 2010
Thursday, September 2, 2010
After this, we discussed the short story "War" further.
Basically, we identified all the parts of the plotine for this story
If you were not here, you need to write this quiz. The notes from the powerpoint will be in your portfolio.
The next story we will read is on page 60 of your Crossroads text.
Wednesday, September 1, 2010
Wednesday, September 1, 2010
We then discussed "War" by Timothy Findley (powerpoint). If you were not here, I have placed this information in your box as well. I had all the students write an in-class summary of the short story. This was used as a homework check.
Your assignment was then to create a plotline on an 11 X 17 sheet provided using the notes we took yesterday. If you were not here, these notes have already been placed in your portfolio. These plotlines are due tomorrow.